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[dnsext] draft-ietf-dnsext-dnskey-registry-fixes-01 editorials
Hello again,
in an attempt to quickly follow up to the most recent versions of
the active DNS related I-Ds before IETF, I arrived at your draft,
draft-ietf-dnsext-dnskey-registry-fixes-01.
I fully agree with that document and support it being forwarded
quickly for publication as an RFC.
One semi-technical question:
Should the Reference to "FIPS 180-1" in the registry entry #3
better be updated to the current version, FIPS 180-3 ?
Similar for "FIPS 186" --> "FIPS 186-3" ?
IMO, either both or none should be quoted with the version included.
This update could be done during this fixup as well (adding more
notes to Section 3).
A few editorials to be kept in mind:
(1) Section 1, 1st para
| ... codes for digital signature algorithm (...).
--- v
| ... codes for digital signature algorithms (...).
(2) Section 2, 1st para
Strike "This status . "
(3) Section 5.2
Should references to FIPS 186[-3] and FIPS 180[-3] be added
to this section?
For completeness:
[I-D.ogud-iana-protocol-maintenance-words] now published as RFC 5702!
Kind regards,
Alfred.
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