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Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-dnsext-wcard-clarify-07.txt

A couple of minor proof-reading-type edits:

2.2.3 Yet Another Definition of Existence

   RFC1034's wording is fixed by the following paragraph:

   The domain name space is a tree structure.  Nodes in the tree
   either own at least one RRSet and/or have descendants that
   collectively own at least on RRSet.

                              ^^ should be "one"

2.3 When does a Wild Card Domain Name is not Special 

Improper grammar. Should probably be "When Is a Wild Card Domain Name Not Special?" or "When Does a Wild Card Domain Name Not Invoke [or "Incur"?] Special Processing?"

								- Kevin




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